Rehab Facility

Thaks for the comments fellas. Ben, I notice you're in Detroit (or the Detroit area). I taught 3dsMax and Photoshop for 6 years over at Lawrence Tech University School of Arch. and for 5 years at (my alma mater) University of Detroit School of Arch. Did you happen to attend either of those? I agree with your comments about the objects on the table in the foreground of the first image. All the other equipment pictured, however, is modeled.

I am really diggin the color pallet used throughout the scenes between the wall colors and carpet etc. I think it works really well and you've made it seem like a positive place that would 'rehabilitate' people. Not sure if its bc some of the machines are photos (could be cg, Im unsure) but in a few areas they lack ao or any contact shadows. As you already mentioned some of the people/props seemed more rushed and thrown in there as others, if you get to go back to this image maybe either taking out some of the props on the table with a stretched/flat perspective, or using some 3d objects for them instead. Also the car I could see them asking for it but I think rather than throwing a car in the lobby that feels a bit out of place a large poster advertising "Driving Rehab" or something of that sort may have fit the environment a bit better. But with that being said we all know how clients and deadlines can be. Overall really nice scene!

Nice, clean render. You did a good job with this. I agree with you about the people. They lack shadows and AO. No other critics from me :)