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Rafael Emidio
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thanks for the comments
My intention was heaven opening, I should have made clearer the sky where would the sunshine
thank you
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Christopher Czerwinski
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Hello!
Very nice image. But i have some comments:
Lighting - bench has a hard shadow but sky is rather rainy
Models - trees, especially 2 trees and right side of picture are TOO close of buidling. Trunks are almost into walls.
Mood - general mood is OK, but lighting problem is too big (sun shadows and rainy sky)
Composition - for me more interesting is building behind big tree than big tree. Maybe 2-3 persons walikng around buildings should give more life to picture. Maybe some droplets on "camera" and some rain falling down should give more "AUTUMN" mood.
MAterials and textures are OK, details of buildings are good too.
Respect for your hardwork and greetings from Poland
Krzysztof Czerwinski