Bathroom WIP, looking for more realism
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Patrik Petersson
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Thank you all for the comments, if i have the time ill post a final render with an upgraded towel tomorrow, after that its vacation :)
Jakub Cech
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For me, this is very very good looking as it is.....At firts sight it was perfect....an that is what I think is the most important thing! Now when checking details. Plant - looks a little artificial. Thats everything i may say... really beautiful overall.
Tony Taanayel
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the plant is kind of better this time,
i echo StanZ, the towel can use some improvement, and i must disagree with JCM. the toilet is like THE thing that gives it some more realistic aspect... maybe show it abit more, or push it abit back
keep going :)
Stan Zaslavsky
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great start - looks very nice and i like the mood you've created of calm and tranquility..
i would look at making the towel hanging there a bit more fluffy and maybe add some colour to it ... at the moment it looks more like paper folded rather than a towel - maybe make it longer too ?
keep going :)
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Patrik Petersson
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Thanks, and yeah i've thought about the toilet aswell. Maybe i should swap it with something else that fits better to the image.
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Juan Carlos Moreno
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Very nice WIP,
My only suggestion would be a compositional one.
The toilet on the left side is a bit distracting. I would probably crop it out of the image.
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Patrik Petersson
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Now i have done some alternations, personally i think i got a better result but i cant really get that plant to look good enough. Any tips anyone, im using a leaf texture as a two-sided vray material.
Regards, Patrik
Tony Taanayel
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the floor, the walls and the ceilling are really great and real, those are gd, just the things i mentioned before, and it will be perfect :)
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Patrik Petersson
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Thanks for the reply, obviously i need some more work on the materials. I'll get in to it and see i can make them more beliveable.
thanks again.
Tony Taanayel
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i must say, first sigh really really looks real,well done
a detail or two that gives u up... the plant in the corner ? it really looks fake/3D....
and the wood thing on the right, is doubty... and its too clean, considering the many dirt on the floor... if u could reduce abit the dirt, and i duno.... the wood it doubty....
oh and one last thing... the faucet, or watever u call it, the thing that throws water, it looks really 3d.
but its really an impressive WIP, well done