my city

Not sure why there is a tilt to the camera. I would straighten this shot.

thank u i will keep attantion on this points

Not a bad first start. I assume you are using scanline for render? Two things you need to look into... Non repeating textures... evident in the brick. and the image seems a bit blown out. To much sunlight / shadow contrast. The curb seems VERY high, esp in relation to the lamp post. The texture on the ground doesnt seem parallel to the street, somewhat confusing. That said, you have framed the shot appropriately with some foreground in the front on the right... Good start.