My first house

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Nice first work Elamos. I agree with tommy about the beam of lights.. I'd loose them. Also, I would recommend brightening up the inside of the house.. seems dim, also light up the bedroom window above 2nd floor too. I would also recommend giving sky a little bit more contrast.. maybe a purplelish gradient towards dark blue or something.
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Ok Tommy, thanks!
Very nice indeed. I like the glass. I think the leaves on the ground look a little staged. If you're going to put some leaves, you have to put alot, or a supporting cast of sticks, stones and dirt. I would also add a touch of third point perspective. This is entirely subject to preference, but Im of the opinion that images at this angle need a bit otherwise they feel top-heavy. Only other thing is the beams of light (volumetrics?) that are coming out of the soffit lights. I would lose/alter those. Good job!