A House Outside The City
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andhika nugraha
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Thank You All my friend for the critics,,it's very valuable for me,,
I will remember and apply it in the next job..
thanks again,,greetings..
paul rodham
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and remove the dead tree in the foreground.
the entire vegetation is troubling in fact - it looks like ithe building is located on a beach, but you have a mix of deciduous and coniferous trees, red vines growing out of nothing and a dead tree in the foreground. the hair and fur grass should be done in smaller patches, not applied over the entire beach.
the building looks good though.
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Girish D Joshi
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Looks pretty good.
If you remove the grass and add a little sharpness, I feel it's done.
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ralf kirsch
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Agree to Rahat - there is something strange about the grass. Try to sharpen the images bevor posting in the forum a little bit ( sharpening mask range 1,2 pixel value 60 ) Everything else is great. I like it a lot. Very good texturing. Very realistic. RK