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Mark Lee
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Thanks for all the comments and crits!
BVI - Yeah there's a lot goin on but the key to this image was life/activity and nature so your right when you said it's the nature of this type of image.
PuffinVIZ - I couldn't resist the duck :-)
Inxa - As with all images, there's always a degree of client input that needs to be addressed. They were keen to show 'activity' and the canoe guy fell into that.
Crazy Homeless Guy - the birds come into the whole 'nature' thing, but maybe they're too close to the top of the pool compositionally? As for the framing, the client wanted to show the 'street' to the right, so we couldn't crop anything off the right. I do agree some more to the left might have helped, but for the client, this wasn't a major issue.
Thanks everyone for your comments...!
Travis Schmiesing
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+1, and remove the bird/plane above the building. My eye keeps looking at both of these.
Also the framing bothers me a bit, I want to see what the building is looking out to, and instead it is cut off. I think it might be nice to cut some of the stuff out on the right,. and show more on the left.
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Girish D Joshi
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Very nice render. Like the light a lot. Some PS or Ps like looking elements need work, first thing I would remove that guy from the lake :)
Athanasios Karampitsakos
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Excellent.
Adam McPartland
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I love this image....respect for including a duck!
Rahat Amin Chowdhury
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Great job!
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Chris MacDonald
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Fantastic image, and design. I've always loved that Kalzip style on modern buildings, looks great!
Nicolas Bischoff (www.burn.co.za)
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Hey Mark. A very good image. There might be a bit to much going on, but I suppose thats the nature of this type of image.