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Andy Hickes
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I like the feeling. It has a feeling. Not "photorealistic" but unique, that is what I like.
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gregory mertens
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Consider getting rid of all that forground (crop of the bottom quarter or so).
-.- .-.
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Eggrolls. Thank you for the crit. I may have another church render coming in and this
will be ground zero when/if I get it.
Thanks.
Jeff Mottle
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Hey William,
Got your PM, so here's a few crits:
1) Building looks good for this style, but the entourage, sky and surroundings are not sitting well with me. Does not really tie together well with the architecture. Feels very disconnected and as though its from a completely different scene.
If you work on the stuff around the architecture, should be a solid image.
2) The perspective of the shrubs on the left in that pointed shape are not the right perspective to match the architecture.