IB Pneus - Marinhu
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MARINHU
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THANK YOU , When i have more time i'll work on this , i just have one day to do the 3d . but i'll work on this more .
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bon bonz
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Not bad - the interior does look good!
However, there are some issues.
Firstly, I can't help but notice how 'out-of-place' this building appears. Everything besides the building appears desaturated. Besides the obvious texture issues with the bricks, the entire roof looks awkward. Are bricks even laid in that manner? It looks like the sidewalk is missing a texture completely.
One of the girls hasn't even been cropped properly. I can see remnants of the original texture that she's come from. Also, is there a sign that identifies this building? Some of the wheel frames clip through the building’s floors, too.
Reduce the vignetting. It's way too strong and hurts the sky.
Lastly, I can't tell where the primary light is coming from. This makes nearly every shadow questionable as I can't tell what's creating it.
I apologize if my critiques sound harsh. Seeing that nobody’s commented yet, I think that it’s better that I notify you of your mistakes so that you won’t repeat them. This looks like a complex scene and I’m sure that you spent a lot of time on it. Next time – or if you have time to revisit this scene – spend the extra hours to polish your renders and make it extra special.
Good luck, Marinhu!