propose perspective view

thanks to your advise.. i want to remove the second image it was a mistake,and its a good comment that i must learn more about rendering like the GI. thanks jon.

Good first time... Are you using Global Illumination? (GI) If not, you might want to learn how to use it to give your images some more realism. Otherwise, the foreground foliage needs to be of a higher resolution, it's too pixely. The sky needs to be a little more saturated and brighter. Add a background, maybe trees and stuff to give some depth to the image. P.S. You posted this image twice by the way.