night interior

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Thank u much azeta. I ll keep in mind your suggestions. It has already been so useful for me reading your comments , thanks again.
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Hey dogu! nice job to be one of the first you do! There are some weak points in the image that you should solve. First of all, the floor, the wood is way too blury, try getting a bigger texture. Then it would be nice if you add some reflection on it, that improves a lot an image. Then the pendant lights on the ceiling, try to get a bit burned the botton part, so light seems to come from there, now it seems like shoplights are placed outside the lamp. Now the weaker part, the city background!! seems like it is printed over the glass, perspective and horizon line are far away from matching the render, try to work on that, if you dont have perspective basics look for some tutorial over the internet, it is a basic topic if you plan to keep improving your work. Then i see some detalis, mostly personal taste. I would change the checker poster, maybe put some interesting image there or a painting. I also dont like that couch, try something more minimal, and improve the leather texture, now looks way too plastic. And finally try to use one or two strong colours in the scene. Hope my coment helps you, keep un working, cheers!