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Thomas Hope
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Not bad. I can see the attraction in this image. In essence it has some atmosphere, and I quite like quirky shots like this. The composition needs a bit more conscious effort though, I believe. (Example: simply cropping the left side may balance things significantly, But) the remaining lines in the image still don't make a coherent composition to me. The colour palette is nice enough, but the light and shade elements are a bit random (in an not aesthetically pleasing way); The dark window and gutters/downpipe pull the eye to the top right for no apparent reason.
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MaxMalyy
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bump is need more resolution for this shot
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JohanR
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I´ve thought about that with the blur, and it was something i just put there, not thinking too much about it. :p but realized now that it doesn´t make sense. Here´s the original [ATTACH=CONFIG]39471[/ATTACH][IMG]http://forums.cgarchitect.com/images/misc/pencil.png[/IMG]

Stephen Leworthy
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i find myself being disturbed a bit by the camera angle and dof. could we see the original phot you're trying to emulate? might help point out the differences in composition. it looks like we're taking a macro shot from inside a model with this dof.