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Elamos
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I'm thinking about the grass displacement, for the next work, 3d grass maybe.
Thanks!
Rahat Amin Chowdhury
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Well done....a nice render....but i think a little lighting contrast could do a great help.....the grass looks fine in smaller view - but when i see it in the zoomed in view - it's like thousands of spikes....displacement issue man.....should use Vray FUR or Autograss or any 3d Grass staffs.
I took the liberty of post processing the lighting a little.....hope you won't mind...:).....just to show you the point.....:D
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Still it's a really awesome work for a first time exterior render......BRAVO!
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jblsscado
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architectural presentation is good,its well presented....the client will not say, your landscape presentation is not good...or the background is not good..
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dogu guven
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i know it represents stacked stone but it still seems stretched to me.
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tristan basco
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We're so focused on the trees that we forget there's a forest. Forget about displacement and leaves, focus on the fundamentals like composition, balance etc. For starter, you should not crop the roof., you should have a focal point,etc . your technique's fine.
Athanasios Karampitsakos
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I agree about the grass. And I don't like the small leaves near the pool. Otherwise you have done a very good image.
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tristan basco
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its called stacked stone and it looks like that.
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dogu guven
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Good lighting.
-The stone wall could be better , stones seems squashed.
-Is grass displacement ? If it is , modelled grass would be better.
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Elamos
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Thanks a lot! Working hard.
Antoine Desjardins
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Very good image.. especially for a first. Congrats.