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Tempest1295
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I would have to agree with the comments of those listed above, the grass is way too green. The water also does look very odd.
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Abdullah
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hi Antoine,
What I see that you have just changed the lighting mood. it looks like a late afternoon now. what oppose the shadow direction. Also blurry effect is little bit too much. I liked the version sanakaralingam did.
Anyway, it was great too. just a different mood. :)
Antoine Desjardins
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This image is really close to a stunning visual. Key points to improve:
1 - color correct
2 - Increase contrast slightly (I think a brightly light day would boast stronger contrast levels)
3 - Desatruate the image or at least the grass
4 - stylize more. Throw a dreamy blur or other stylistic elements just for kicks
I did some quick photoshopping from a screen print. I hope this helps.[ATTACH=CONFIG]40269[/ATTACH]
Rendering.no
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Hi,
I agree with the guys with the grass and etc. I would also correct the tiles in front of the entrance. defenetly not so reflective.
maybe a more dirty wather.
But general lightning and mood its very nice.
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lenin sanakaralingam
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Thankyou for the nice co/c from all of my relatives. I will try to follow all the advises in feature.
Thank you!
Abdullah
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I would suggest you only to edit the left tree. increase its receive global illumination amount. and work on water little a bit. Rest of the things seams okay to me. You made a nice render. :)
murtaza simari
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i agreed with above points...and also water is looking unnatural overall lighting & render is very nice...
neil poppleton
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Overall lighting is good, but the grass looks odd
Athanasios Karampitsakos
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You have a nice image, but your grass is too green. Also the left ivy has not branches (which ivy generator you have used?) and the left tree is too dark. The building is nice but the windows are flat, so these need some opacity. Generally I would recomend to dirt the image a little bit in order to get a more real effect.