Armenian Heritage Museum

thank u so much for ur comments dear Arnold .. and ya I agree with u that this one is not my best one .. but i really like the building .. and i just wanted to share something with u people ..... ur observations are so right and accurate.. and maybe i knew them .. but i couldn't rate this one .. so now i can rate after ur discussing .. maybe u can visit my other working in the gallery and make comments .. i really want to improve myself .. anyway .. i like ur works .. :)

Hi Ali, I think the yellow tail light glow is awkward and unnecessary. It's a day time so why would it be there. I would also try to vegetate on the left hand behind the building as there seems to be nothing there. I think composition would work better.. I also find the round bushes rather random and they do not look natural within the environment. I think if you want to improve quality of your work you need to observe of what happens in reality and not do what you think happens but look at photographs and try to replicate. Grass is never perfect and introducing blemishes, bit of dirt and sidewalks, scattered leaves always adds to the picture. Otherwise your modelling looks good and just required bit of attention to detail and you shall get there... Good luck..