Exterior - Private School

thx all for comments!...here's another view.. a closeup of a courtyard/playground in the front.

[ATTACH=CONFIG]39715[/ATTACH] Hi Jonathan. Nice render and defenitly your personal style. Lightning and modeling are very good as usual . There is one structure line missing where I put the circle. Watch out the reptition of the bush elements. I know what your intentios are with the right part of the building but on one hand you try to '' cover the length with entourage on the other hand you enhance the existence by posing a dark field on the left ( tree ) and a golden sportscar with people beneath it in contrast to the white sky. Greatings. RK

Couple of small things. The hedge pattern to the left of the flag pole is starting to repeat. The roof area to the left of the flag is showing the short piece of roof a lot more textured the the long section. Getting some white trim bleed to the right of the flag. On the left side of the building one of the windows at the top is totally black whereas the other windows have lighter reflections. I know, picky, picky, picky....

Very clean render. I would loose the tree's body on the left edge of the image, it takes some attention away from the building. The sky also need to be much darker to emphasize the shape of the building. Good work!

thx james... parking lines are modeled, with a little bit of noise added in post, perhaps I should add more noise? I see what you are saying about the bldg being lost. Client wanted me to crop off the right side of the bldg, doesn't like the back of his bldg says it's too long, so I recommended instead of cropping it off the image, if I can just cover it with "entourage". I guess this is a bad idea composition wise heh?.. but better then cropping.

Foliage, modeling and lighting looks great as usual Jonathan... only comment I could make is that the shape of the building gets lost against the white clouds as your eye works itself to the right side of the image. Are the parking lines post or modeled?