"lazy on a rainy sunday"
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Jason Bergeron
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Unless the woman on the chair is supposed to be 8 feet tall, I think you should make her a bit smaller.
Another small critique is that it took me a moment to realize that the roof isn't sitting directly on the front wall, but further back at a high level. Your camera angle is creating this confusion, I believe.
Vizcon
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Thank you guys, I appricated .
I have learned a lot from these critiques, this will help me to get better.
Athanasios Karampitsakos
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I agree with mmr. Do these little thinkgs in order to lift image's quality.
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marwan s
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the image looks good regardless to eternit imo it s not such a big deal, but yeah u called it "rainy" and there s no sign of rain or water. u could have chosen leafless trees to put in the reflection to give it a more winter look. as for the woman she looks too saturated, u should lower color saturation and contrast on her --> compared to the image. now a "very personal opinion" the woman looks energetic because of the look on her face, not lazy, but as i said this is a "very personal opinion"...
Travis Schmiesing
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Your attached image has a variation in height where the shingles overlap each other, meaning it is not perfectly flat. The shingles in your image look perfectly flat.
William Garcia
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I really liked the atmosphere it created, congrats.
jms.lwly
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Doesnt look like it currently or has been raining! - "lazy on a dry sunday".
Vizcon
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I have found the irises on evermotion, 3d model
Vizcon
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AS for the roof tiles, it"s a are a flat roofing sheets "eternit" you can see here a sample from the website:
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paul rodham
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like this one much more. also agree on the roof tiles looking 'flat'.
where are the irises from ?
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Mohaned Al Sabti
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very nice, i like the materials, colors en mood. i am not really sure but i think that the roof is very flat.
keep up the good work