Higher Education Building

Nicely done for an architectural presentation!

The foreground slab was a bit of a struggle. It's a project that's being proposed a on tight urban sight. We were only able to get this view angle by putting the camera at a point that placed it inside an existing building. We could've just hidden the building and left the slab, but did not want to imply that there was going to be an expansive plaza at this location, it's actually a street. To give the scale of the space a more acurate interpretation, I also left the shadow that would be cast by the that existing building. Therefore, it looked strange to not have a terminus for the ground plane. Enter the ground slice solution. The earth section could have a little more contrast with the ground plane. Its a fine balence though, because a majority of the images that I work on become printed copy, dark areas tend to loose too much detail. Thanks for the comments, I really appreciate feedback.

I love the style of this image. I'd say if there was one thing that I could nitpick it would be the weird foreground slab. Which P+W office do you work for? *edit* just read your info, duh, don't answer that ;)

I don't think anything needs improvement. Your style is awesome! I really like the blend of photo-real with a little sketch and watercolor. The only thing that I might change is the section cut in the foreground. I don't mind it being there, I would just give it a little more contrast between the soil and pavement. Great work overall!

needs so much of improvement

Could you expand on that?

needs so much of improvement

great work !!!