Patio for Poor Man
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Yama Yama
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I think your image has a big potential.
What i don't like about it is the anti aliasing. For my taste everythign is too sharp.
Espacially the texture on the left wall....
With a bit more AA, a better sky and some Photoshop work, you could make a great pic with a nice mood.
cheers
Yama
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Salvatore Tinervia
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Absolutely beautiful just a few little things...the grass looks excellent from far away and it gets more unrealistic closer to the camera. Second of all the sky looks extremely generic and I can immediately tell you used a Vray sun. I would recommend adding a dome in the background with a sky texture. It will give much more "completed" feel to the scene. Other than that your work is absolutely beautiful. What vegitation system did you use for the palms? Rendered beautifully....especially the date palm. :)
Stephen Leworthy
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nicey, but too much depth to the grass displace. also, too bright - turn the secondary bouncing down a lot.
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Chris MacDonald
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Agreed with the comments above, but one other thing is that I'd also like to see more contrast introduced to the scene. The fact is that on a bright sunny day such as the one you've shown the objects that are in shadow would be considerably darker.
Athanasios Karampitsakos
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Nice but it would be better with grass objects and not displacement.