Ice Cram Store

Where are the ice cream cones ?

Hi - You need to turn your lights on! The only lighting seems to be global illumination from the window. An ice cream shop would have bright lights, reflections, high lights - a lot going on. Glass, stainless steel, shiny countertops; these would all be brightly lit. I would not even show light coming in the window. You'd do that for a living room or bedroom but not for a small food retail space. Your sign text needs a space between the & and the P, the shelf behind needs more merchandise.