Finall year project submission _ Project Paharpur
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gregor sartin
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for me this is good.no complaints on the design itself.i think this will be categorized as an minimalist design.the design fits as what the purpose of the structure is.good work.i wish i could render as much realism as you do.i also got a museum work but not as much realisticly rendered as this.GJ
Rahat Amin Chowdhury
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Thanks.........but i wanna argue about some things.......concrete material is not at all stretched........i photographed it and placed it real scale......i wanted the exact same rough effect. The Library tables are tiled - because they are made of wooden planks......:P......maybe the repetition of the planks are looking like tiles UVW fault from distance. Well there is a problem with the first image due to camera distortion - the entire scene is 400ft wide and i tried to grab the whole scene in one frame........maybe that's causing scaling illusions........in that case.......i must say this is a fault.......:P
I agree with the rest Think3d.........thanks for ur sharp eyes.......:D
Athanasios Karampitsakos
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Hey Rahat. From a quick view I find these:
- Grass is too dark.
- Concrete tiles enough and on some faces is too stretched.
- Pavement's map is too big.
- Road is too dark without ant texture.
- Cars are small enough.
- Water hasn't any opacity and look like abyss.
- Inside table's material is tiling.
- Inside balcony's material is going down on the above faces.
I hope these help.
Rahat Amin Chowdhury
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well - i agree........with the grass staffs......i admit i had very lilttle time for this shit.......2 days flat.....:P........and another thing........the texture of the concrete is as it is i wanted.........yeah repeat tiling is occurred but the structure size is massive......the entire structure (the building only) is 4 acres in size. The dark light zones are supposed to be dark......do ya think a narrow space of 20ft wide while the side walls are 55 feet high and the tunnel is 150 ft long will contain that much light even after having a bridge on top of it?.......i doubt that.......:)
The interior materials are exactly the things i wanted - why bother provide different materials while the interior is no different with the theme and concept of the exterior.........concrete is concrete........tiles are tiles.........and as for interiors dark shadows - yeah a little dark......but i tried to create a depth with lighting......not always flooded away lighting gives the impression of a space.....:)
Thanks for ur precious comment.........:)
Reggie Felder
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On your exterior - your grass looks almost black. You have a lot of dark shadows were light would naturally bounce around and wouldn't be that dark. You can easily spot the tiling in your concrete. Your road is extreme clean and black maybe adding some lines would help?
Your interior looks better, but again a lot of dark shadows. It also feels like you used the same materials on your interior walls as your exterior. Maybe bringing in more color will help the scene.
Rahat Amin Chowdhury
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dear Thanasis..........this is no clients work........this is actually an Architectural Project and the design and massing is AS IT IS when the design will be done.........it was my demand......not my clients...:P.......:D
Can ya please explain on which parts do ya think the modeling flaws are?.........it'll be very much useful for me.......:D
Athanasios Karampitsakos
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Hey Rahat, your lighting and camera angles are good, but the modelling looks too unreal. I don't know if this was your client's demand but I think you could do better.
Rahat Amin Chowdhury
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not a single comment yet?......:|.........i wander what's what.......:(
anyways.........i recon the images a bit blurred out.........upload image quality reduction issue......so i am sharing the nicer quality one's link :
http://archanimodrender.blogspot.com/2011/02/somapura-mahavihara-archaeological.html
Thanks for watching
Rahat Amin Chowdhury
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Interior snaps _ central library :
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Thanks for watching........:)