Moving to a new house
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mgraphix
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Thanks:)
Good tips. Cloth are the hardest to make natural and realistic...
I really need to learn that. It destroys the best picture if the cloth looks like marzipan :)
Tyson Junkers
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I have to say, I love the first image much more but only have a few things I'd change about it -
[IMG]https://img.skitch.com/20110421-1i17q519hbusp87cs5ntpd5k8c.jpg[/IMG]
Nolan Miller
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I like it :)
Nice job.
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mgraphix
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Updated. What do u think ?
I need to learn spline mapping better. The texture on the chair is weird...
Chair is desaturated, spotlight turned off and two more boxes is added. moved some things a little as well
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mgraphix
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Thanks:) I´m gonna start by turning off the colored spotlight pointing on the chair, and let the window light flood a bit on the chair as well. The wood is actually quite like the bed in original without the spotlight, but maybe I need to desaturate it further.
I am trying to instill the idea of moving in, and think you´re right about more boxes. I don´t feel like adding more furniture / art at this time, but maybe at a later time when they´re completely moved in:)
Nolan Miller
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The Image is looking great;
Just some comments on the design if I may. (Just giving you some ideas.)
You have alot of books on the ground, being "unpacked" but no bookcase/shelves anywhere in the scene. Try adding a couple side tables or a bookshelf.
The back Wall seems a bit bare; maybe at a piece of art above the bed?
If your trying to instill the Idea of "Moving in", maybe add some more boxes into the foreground of the image.
Also; reconsider the chair. don't get me wrong; its a great model but it really doesn't feel like it belongs in this scene, try going for something abit more contemporary with a wood finish that matches the bed. LOL!
Sorry *shrugs* just trying to help :)
Great job though.. seriously
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mgraphix
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You´re so right. I stared myself blind on other things and didn´nt see that. That shadow are waay to hard. It´s from track light in the roof that are almost burned out by the windowlight. I had more of an eveninglight feeling earlier where that was visible. I think I´ll just turn it off. will update later totay...
Antoine Desjardins
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Looks great. The only thing I noticed is that the chair has a hard shadow, but it looks like the window is the only light source. I assume the track lights are causing the shadow, but they look like they are off. Maybe add a glare and warm up the color temp on the track lights to make the source of the light more obvious. Otherwise, very nice light and clean render.