Living room of olden days
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ralf kirsch
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Some PS correction . Ceiling is very nice but the bump structure of the wood is again assegerated. Bricks are ok for me. The new flooring looks good but try to play around with some other patterns just for looking for other possibilities. The new camera position is hih about 190cm - go for something like 160 and you get the standard view that gives a more correct perspective of inner spaces. Much better though. RK
Mohammed Yusuf
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Thanks a lot Ralf. I am happy that u have liked the rendering and lighting..It seems u have taken a good amount of time to observe my work...I am so happy to get a detailed reply from u. Whatever errors u had pointed, I have tried to correct it..Like I have reduced the wooden structure of stairs. I have reduced the size of bricks and have given more bump. I have changed the flooring and ceiling also...Ceiling I have used geometry to make wooden beams which were common in olden days...
To me atleast now it is looking the best image out of the three... But I want ur suggestions...Thanks in advance....[ATTACH=CONFIG]38158[/ATTACH]
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ralf kirsch
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The render all over is very good and you've put the right mood in it. The bric bump in the first image was realistic but the sice of the brics arn't. Make them a liitle bit smaller and keep the bump values you had. The wood structure seems way to big too and makes the stairway appears like a dull house. The bump values of the second image for the wood is fine so. I'm not too convinced about the outside window environment. It seems to be in motion blur. The plane lights behind the windows should be shot down a little respect to the late evening mood outside. If there is windowglas, it should reflect some of the interiors. Are you shure about the ceiling ( floor ) wood structure ??? All little things by changing them you get a very realistic render IMO. RK
Mohammed Yusuf
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Thanks Thanasis for ur comments...Yes the bump values are too much. I thought it will give a realistic effect to the image...But u r right . It is destroying the nice feeling.. I have reduced the bump values to minimum and sending the image again. Please give more comments...I am awaiting comments from other experts also....[ATTACH=CONFIG]38118[/ATTACH]
Athanasios Karampitsakos
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The render is good but the materials have too much bump that destroys the whole nice feeling.