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Jeremy Ramsay
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Many thanks, thats just the sort of feedback I was after. I suspected the purple flowers were a bit much and I wasn't happy with the car or family either. I've never used Z depth but will try it out.
Such quick responses, thanks again
Athanasios Karampitsakos
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I agree Audi and people don't match the image....
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Nils Homeier
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in addition to stephens comment IMO the Audi looks totally out of place. I might be wrong, but the perspective, size and lighting on the car feel wrong. Its a bit hard to tell, but maybe flipping the car right over might help. I looks as if it was lit right from the other side...
Bradley DeWald
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I agree with all of Stephen's comments.
Stephen Thomas
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I think this is looking really nice, just a couple of things I would tweak. I agree that the tree shadow in the foreground is a little overwhelming at the moment, also I would adjust it so that the branch doesn't touch the chimney. The family would look better without the motion blur and possibly placed further back, just outside the front door. There is also too big a difference in contrast between your background and your render. Fading out the trees behind the house a little, possibly using a z-depth pass, would help to make the transition a little more gradual and believable.
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Frank Richarz
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Might be my pc, but the shadows look very dark. I would try lightening up the entire image. Also the purple flowers are distracting, they draw you away for the house. The modeling and textures look good. I think you could leave out the family. It's about the architecture not the people.