Dorm Room
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Edwin Jordan
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I would add some variety to the book cover and size. Since they are all the same my eye goes straight to them. The books on the far top shelf have a size variety but are also the same cover and everyone else
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David Johnson
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I can ser what u mean by the orange being too saturated. I did that in photoshop to help it look more like its sunrise. On my next day of ill work on varying the book textures and post an updated render!
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Arshad Khan
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Its pretty cool as it is..but maybe some directional sunlight pouring in,some use of DOF will make it more realistic.
Justin Hunt
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The pink and orange colour scheme isn't doing it for me, the orange it too saturated and the pink too muddy.
had a little play, hope you dont mind
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Abel Vargas
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Hey, nice render. The direct sun light made it even better. Two things caught my eyes, the image on the background looks a little too low res and the books with the blue and orange texture looks a little repetitive, in texture and position. But maybe it's what you're looking for, so I'm not sure if that's something to change.
I think your window is looking very nice and the textures a right on! Great work!
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David Johnson
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I took your suggestion and added the sun!
I do think it looks better, and I also made a few minor additions you might notice.
Let me know how it looks and anything else I can work on!
Thanks again!
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Satish Jogi
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I think it looks quite good as it is, but for the sake of getting better renders, maybe you can try adding direct sunlight? I think it might help connect the exterior to interior, the shadows from the balcony railings...