Exam Room
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xzd carl
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Don't mention it!Looking foward to more your opuses!
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Steve Mai
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Thanks Xzdcarl.
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xzd carl
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Atmosphere quite good,but the picture look like too soft.
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Steve Mai
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Thanks Matt. I am glad you like it. :)
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Matt Brophy
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I think is this incredible, really like the rays!
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Steve Mai
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Thanks Joseph, Your comment is much appreciated.
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JosephAHaddad
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Very nice and expressive! Nice job!
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Steve Mai
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Thanasis:
Thank you for pointing those out. It's my fault dude :). I think I can not be lazy by only twisting around it with photoshop. Looks like a re-render is a need in this case for achieving the right light effect. However, I won't have time to revise this anymore.
Athanasios Karampitsakos
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Steve this is a good concept image, but I have two comments:
1. This light glow is unphysical, because the curtain is thick and not light transparent.
2. Where this light comes from? Because the curtain cuts the way to sunlight to this point ( unless there is another window vertically, which the camera should picture it ).
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Steve Mai
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Hello everyone,
I just revised this render. I would like to keep the background. And this is done for me now. I don't think I will do anymore revise. Thanks guys. :)
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Steve Mai
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[U][COLOR=red]Ryan:[/COLOR]
[/U]Thank you for your comment. I totally agree with you that the exam room should be extremely clean... because I am in a health care design firm ;therefore, I know it very well. However, this scene was not intended for client to see. I just would like to see an exam room in my imagination that rays of light ("hope") coming in through the window. To me it is more interesting to see this mood than a typical mood as we see in an exam room everyday.
About the rays, I think it does not mater how clean our room is, as long as sun lights can penetrate our window glass, we will always see rays.
[COLOR=red][U]Gary:[/U][/COLOR]
Thanks for your comment. I agree with you about the curtain and ambient occlusion. I think I will revise it when I have time :)
Aubrey Millard
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It seemed appropriate :)
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Steve Mai
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Aubrey, I very appreciate your comment. I like your phrase " Rays of Hope". It really touches my heart. That is all that matters to me.
Gary Ledgerwood
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Overall I think it is a nice image. Some criticism would be that is appears this exam room is in the tree tops of a rainforest. Maybe change the background image. The curtain texture could use a little work as well. The texture itself is dark and scary for an exam room environment, and you would also probably see some light passing through. And finally, the image looks a little heavy on the ambient occlusion. That can be especially seen around the seams of the white portion of the bed.
Ryan Watson
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I actually disagree about the rays. Rays are caused by dust/dirt particles in the air (usually synonymous with old, musty, grungy places). This is an exam room and should be extremely clean....I would seriously consider revising...
Aubrey Millard
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Really nice now. The light rays are soft and it's not burned through the window.
The mood matches the scene, I keep thinking "Rays of hope" :)
Good job.
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Steve Mai
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Thanks Aubrey for your kind comment. I think it was a little bright too; Therefore, I just revised it again. Please take look at it, I would like to know what do you think Aubrey. Thanks
Aubrey Millard
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It's good, the mood you are trying to set is working well. I just think it's a little to bright, but that could just be me :)
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Steve Mai
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I just revised this render a little bit, I am trying to bring a feeling of hope/healing mood to the sceene. C/c again welcomed. Thanks
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Steve Mai
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You are so welcome Randy.