My first exterior in Max
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Anand P
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Thanks guys.! I will work on those. Thanks again.:)
Abdullah
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Top most extended roof part is looking unrealistic. I guess this is what he meant.
nikitas3d
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Well, not exactly weird, but a bit unusual imo. Like the 2 roofs I don't know,something doesn't quite fit, but hey that's just me!
Keep it up!
Anand P
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Thank you nanasba13. Just let me know what looks weird in the building according to you. I would like to improve on my skills and hence would like all the help that I could get. Thanks in advance!:)
nikitas3d
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I agree w Wrender on all points and I too am impressed being that this is your first project w Max.
I really like your modeling, although a bit weird, IMO, but I can see you worked hard on it!
Overall great for your first time, keep on practicing!
Anand P
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Thank you Wrender. Very useful tips, will make sure to take these into account. Thanks.:)
Ryan Watson
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The modeling looks good - but here's a few things I'd work on:
1. Exemplify your focus with your entourage. In other words, frame the building with your trees, landscape, walls, etc. Right now, the palm tree and wall/lights in the foreground are dominating the image - leaving the building to be rather subdued.
2. You might try a more dynamic camera angle to captivate your audience. As is, the image is rather static.
3. Background information - I'd put a line of trees or buildings in the background to obscure the horizon line. Unless this is sitting on top of a hill, you would almost never see this much sky.
4. Your plants are too repetitive - try using different plant varieties with interesting clusters/groupings. The lawn is also to tiled - maybe try grass-o-matic/proxies for real grass blades?
All in all, I'm impressed this is your first rendering in 3dmax. Just some artistic flare and this will be a great rendering!