Floorplan 2D

Talens, To respond to your reply, my criticism is more in line with the Architecture and space planning shown rather than your technique on a rendered floor plan. I did provide criticism about your "rendering technique's." Again, I personally feel the mix of sketchy beds and hard linework doesnt work well together. Ie, if you are going to color furniture, color ALL furniture. The beds specifically look out of place bc they are not colored. The flooring pattern doesnt represent any finish very well. If it is to represent some kind of wood flooring which is where I think you were going, have longer plank boards that represent that. The square pattern within the floor pattern looks confusing. I guess my biggest problem with your post is this: It doesnt seem like you posted for comments but rather advertisement for business. Also, if this is the case, you would choose a better floor plan (if you didnt create it.) And since you provide your services "world wide" you would have that oppurtinity to show the community a plan that is functional to showcase your work. It makes you look bad if this is the type of Architects you work with. On that same note. YOU opened yourself up for criticism when you type HIGH QUALITY when honestly its not that High Quality. That is not to say, this is your best work or you cant produce better work. Im sorry if I am coming off rude. It was and is not my intent to be mean, just very honest. Good luck and wish you much success.

Thank you for your comment

vance's comment might be too harsh, but he has points, good or bad comments, we should take them as constructive criticisms in order for us to improve our work. goodluck to your future projects talens. :)

Any comment is appreciated, good or bad. To begin the project is one aquitecto and I just color the whole work. If the architect wants a palm tree in the dining room, because I will not color it. You do not understand your criticism about me. It can be horrible for you, but surely I have something to teach, some have no work in its portfolio, only bad reviews are not constructive. Another thing, there are 85 sight, are 135. And the service Cgarchitect surely have other things to do than listen to rude comments is to see the galleries of its members. Greetings to Cgarchitect to have somewhere to put our work, whether architects, designers and students of 1 year.

AWFUL FLOOR PLAN... Bedroom Closets in hallway. You have to access another bedroom door to get to a private bathroom? Storage racks in the way of doors? Floor pattern needs work... Graphics are honestly weak in general with the mix of sketchy beds and harder line casework. My only conclusion is not done by someone who went to Architecture school or maybe done by first year student. 85 views, no comments? seriously? I had to say something.. To boot an adverstisement for services? Really?