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Adnan Ayegh
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Wow my GOD i`m very happy for your global friends in all over the world :)
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Taha Malik
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According to me,first of all for this type of building like roman architecture u have to do daytime view, with bright blue sky to feel like grandness n appealing.& again i can say put camera correction & yes agreed use good vegetation, so that ur efforts of ur modeling will come...good modeling is not the result of good visualization need to do a correct thing.. sorry if i say something wronge.
Adnan Ayegh
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Thnx a loooooooot abdullah & Adeel for your HELP :)
i do that & in the next render i Hope you will be with ME ;)
Adeel Hameed
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Mood should be dusk (Evening).
abdullah al-baki is ryt "you painted all the leaves with one single color"
Just chose some good shrubs & Trees from evermotion.
Abdullah
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Well it needs a lot of work. and all those thing you learn from experience as well as from your art sense.
for example tree leaves. it seems to me that you painted all the leaves with one single color. thats not good. in nature there is variation on that.
road tiles at the front looks too big and flat.
and the car. off course its out of scale.
use a beautiful background. and thus you can take your rendering to the next level. :)
now its your turn to take those critic and put some work accordingly.
hope these help.
Adnan Ayegh
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what`s your suggestion about mood ?
car scale is fit I yhing
with what i can make landscape better ? :(((
Adnan Ayegh
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give me some advice man :)
Adeel Hameed
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I like only model....:)
it's my opinion,
1-car scale is not right i think so.
2-in this scene u could create good mood.
3-Landscaping is so bad
There is lot of things which u make it better.
Abdullah
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Camera work and architecture is beautiful but environment need to be improved. IMHO.