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3DS Max PhotoShop
Edit UPDATED IMAGE - just did a new update with some more vegetation added to the scene. Added a depth of field by blurring the foreground and back ground trees.
Hey guys. I started this way back in 2007 for a client. Client lost funding and I never got to finish it. Since it's been so Long I decided to re open it and create it MY way. Problem is I feel like some thing is wrong with what I have going but can't figure out what. I have asked my 2 friends in the field and they each disagree with the other on all aspects. One likes the lighting the other hates it. One likes the over all composition the other hates it.
I personally like the composition but feel some thing isn't right. Now I'm not done I've only just begun! I need to adjust my lighting and tone it down on the buildings a bit and I need to render off a matte pass for my windows and glass to reflect the sky since my MAT ID render choose to make the glass and other parts need it the same color range.....I hate that...
Anyways....please...pllleeease pick it apart. I have thick skin! I think maybe it's just something small that I need to add to it or change slightly and it'll look lots better. My plans right now along with what I mentioned is to add some more vegetation to the foreground some birdies.... all ways need the birds! Change the color of the car...or perhaps just get rid of that section all together. Things of that nature.
Idea guys?? :)
edit: One thing I just realized is my sky and lighting do not match at all...I love my sky but I think that is one thing I need to change. That could help out a lot.
